The animation is pretty good in this little flash vid. So good job with that.
The sound effects were a bit off in the sense that they were obviously sound effects. They seemed almost out of place in a weird way to me. I'm not trying to nit pick, but they just sounded a bit too fake. You cut them off too quickly in areas and had some odd volume edits in others.
The voice overs were pretty decent. The only issue for me is that they are obviously all done by Gaia. Now that isn't a bad thing in the sense that she isn't a good voice actor. On the contrary, she is quite good. But this would definitely benefit from another voice actor helping out.
As with the animation itself, I enjoyed the artwork. I really felt the artwork enhanced the movie, so kudos there.
Lastly I personally feel it was a bit too short. But that is only my personal opinion, so take it as you will there.
5/5 and 9/10 overall. I enjoyed this little diddy. So nice work both of you. :-)
This kicks ass! Very nice job bud!
I Like It...
The art was really good, as was the animation.
It was eery in a way, and very odd how he transformed. But it was very original and cool. And like I said, the animation was very smooth.
The sound effects were appropriate. Nothing phenomenal, but still appropriate.
Maybe something a little longer with a story next time perhaps?
4/5 ans 7/10 overall. Nice work here bud.
If this had music and sound effects it would be pretty good actually. The animation is decent, although the art leaves a little to be desired. But it's a stick movie, so great art isn't really necessary.
2/5 and 4/10 overall. Add some music and sound effects and it jumps to a 4/5 and 8/10 overall.
Pretty Good But...
A few things to think about.
1. The fruit needs to be drawn better. As it is now, you can't tell any difference in them.
2. Put a little more work into the background art. It is kinda dull.
3. Instead of blood, have the fruit spill juice when they are shot! X-D That would be a lot more original, and funny as well.
But all in all, this isn't to bad. 3/5 and 7/10 overall. Decent work, but keep at it bud.
Cool concept, cool animation, cool character, and cool music behind it.
But I should be a bit more specific no?! So, the animation. I like the art for this flash. You did a good job with the artwork, and the animation was just as good. Very smooth animation, which is a nice to change to all the flash kiddies who submit any junk they come up with.
I like the music in the background. Fit the whole flash very well. All in all I''ma give you a 4/5 and 8/10. Cause it is a solid flash, but not a great one by any means.
Good work man.
Thanks for being specific, I'm glad you liked it and i will continue to make better flashes =]
You took a boring concept and made it comical and a delight to watch. I salute you. The animation was pretty good. Although there could have been more/better sound effects. Music in the background would have helped a bit too.
4/5 and 8/10, cause it wasn't really a "great" submission. But a solid one for sure.
As for Braintoast down there saying only flash is allowed on Newgrounds; really dude, get the sand out of your vagina and stop being such a nooblet.
I completely agree with all things you say, the animation is, I think, okay. But it could have been better. About Braintoast... you're saying what I'm thinking. But well... Having sand in your vagina is difficult too, so let's be not too hard for him.
DR. OCTAGONAPUS MOMENT AT THE END!!!! YES!!!! 4/5 AND 8/10FOR THAT, because other than that this wasn't really any good! X-D
the lips never synched up with the voices. But Dr. Octagonapus is always good for 4 points! :-D You made me smile today though, that is for sure!
What sucks is that they sync perfectly on my computer! CURSE YOU INTERWEBZ!
I'm a HUGE House fan. My favorite tv character ever. And this movie really made me smile. First off you did a nice job drawing House and Wilson. Also, while I'm on the art, I definitely feel some Ren and Stimpy animations style going on here.
Not only that but the whole demeanor of the movie was Ren and Stimpy-esque. Fucking amazing in all way man. I love the dance break. Your choice of song was simply epic. By all things holy I say this is my favorite flash I've ever seen! CHEERS!
P.S. - You need to make a series of this man. Your own little House series!
I love those disturbing Ren & Stimpy moments when they're just being intense without saying anything or doing much. :)
P.S. There's a hidden bonus scene (look for easter eggs at the end!) for the Hugh Laurie fans...
Pain and senseless violence always makes for a good movie. Especially when there is no plot or purpose. The more random the better. Nicely done. 5/5 and 10/10 from me because I'm still laughing at it while writing this review. Nicely done bud!
The votes are much appreciated! Glad you liked it.
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