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Nifty...

I like the concept of this song. If it pretty frantic and in your face. I've never played any of the new Mario games since the Nintendo 64 came out. Really, I didn't like Mario 64, and I haven't been interested in any of the games since then.

So I do not know this song, and can't really say if it is a good representation of the song itself.

But, as songs go, this is nifty. There is clipping in the beginning. Just turning down the master fader should help fix this.

The percussion is pretty decent. I can hear most of it, for the most part. Although, the kick is absent in the mix. I can hear the snare and crashed very well. But the kick is almost completely absent.

I like the mix of instruments you created. The synths are all pretty cool sounding. The lead synth with the melody sounds like some odd cousin of FL Slayer. It's weird, but I like it actually. Nifty job there bud.

Overall not bad.

4/5 and 8/10 overall. I can't give anything above and 8/10 when there is clipping involved. I'm sorry, but that is probably the most important thing that you can not have in a song.

-Gravey-

darthmarus responds:

thanks..... this is probably the most in-your-face song i have ever done. it is true there is a little clipping.... i only have the demo of FL so this is sorta the final.

the reason this is clipped is because when i made this, i had not yet mastered the forc- i mean event timeline. thanks for your review!

Oh Cool...

When it first started, I really thought this song was gonna suck. But you proved me wrong.

When everything kicks in, it has a really upbeat feel to it. I do like the different synths you created and used. But I think there could be more. There seems to be something lacking. Everything in this song is very short term. You have no long and held out chords or anything.

This really leads your sound to be a little transparent. I suggest adding a pad, or even some strings in the background. Just have them follow the tonic for all the chords. Because this has a lot of cool sounds and lines going on, but it needs some musical glue to hold them all together.

The drums are decent, but I'm not sold on the yet. Other than that one symbol crash, I'm not able to hear them very well. Maybe do some mixing work on bringing out the kick and snare a bit. That would really help the flow and structure of this song.

One thing that needs work is the ending. It just didn't quite do it for me. Tweak the ending, and that should really help the song a lot.

But as a start, it is pretty good.

4/5 and 7/10 overall. Nifty little tune you got here.

Interesting...

It is obviously still a work in progress. So I will try not to be too harsh. :-)

I'm not sure what I think about the guitar work. The picking style seems a bit forced, and slightly unrehearsed. Maybe this is how you wanted it to sound, but it feels like you were.....ummmm.....nervous, when recording this.

I like the chord structure, and the overall feel you are going for in this song. It really has a ton of potential, it just seems to need to be rehearsed a bit more to be more fluid.

Also, is there going to be any percussion? I see you put this in the jazz section. Might I recommend some trumpet or saxophone parts? That might create a really cool atmosphere.

I like where you are going with this. But it is pretty see-through at the moment. So I can't give it a great score. Definitely let me know when it gets finished. :-)

3/5 and 5/10 overall.

-Gravey-

Interesting...

I like this. It has an almost windy quality, which is pretty intriguing really.

I like how every individual instrument really lives and breathes and the rest of the ensemble. There is nothing that really sticks out at all, besides the percussion. You did a very good job of mixing and mingling all of these sound together into a single cohesive unit. Very good job indeed.

The percussion is a lot of fun, and really groovy in certain areas. You did a great job with the percussion in just about every angle. Because not only were the beats groovy, but the percs themselves were rich and punchy. And that is something that a lot of people miss when working with their percussion.

I like how it fades out at the end. It never really ends, but rather just fades into the distance and melts into the distant scenery. A very nice visual in the end, and I like it a lot.

This is very unique my friend, very unique indeed.

5/5 and 10/10 overall. Great work here.

-Gravey-

RyeGuyHead responds:

woot review

many thanks, many thanks indeed

Oh Yea...

This is so cool bud. I love this one. It has you style written all over it, but it is unique from your other songs.

The chord structure is so different, and creates a very unique mood and atmosphere for this song. The picking style is pretty much the same, but this song has a life special unto itself.

As always though, I really think you need to find a congas sound font to import into Garage Band. And incorporate then into your songs. That is the one thing I think is missing really.

But this is beautiful in it's own right. I wouldn't change anything in the guitar.

5/5 and 10/10 overall.

This has been favorited.

-Gravey-

Boux responds:

Yeah! i put some add9 chords in that one. Kind of found a temporary solution for the congas, as im tapping the guitar while playing.
I know youll keep bugging me about congas till the end of times but its fair enough:D
Thanks again!

Very Relaxing...

...as always from you my friend. :-) I like your style so much. It really is a nice change of pace from what I typically listen to.

To be honest, I'm not sure what to say about this song, that I haven't already said before. Your style has always been so unique, and so soothing to my ears. And this song is no different.

I really like the fadeout at the end. Very nice way to end the song. :-)

5/5 and 10/10 overall. As always, I love it!

-Gravey-

Well...

I really don't feel like leaving quite the same sort of review as I did for the full version. So I'ma make this one short and sweet.

It's soft, soothing, and kinda eery at the same time. I like it, a lot.

5/5 and 10/10 overall. Mainly because the full version is simply that amazing.

-Gravey-

Interesting...

Well couple things.

1. I hate trance.
2. I hate remixes.

X-D

That being said, I won't hold either against you. :-P

First off, the percussion. The percussion is pretty intense. Seems like you compressed everything really well. It all has a real punchy and tight sound, which is of the utmost importance for this music.

The rhythms themselves are pretty well done. Although pretty straightforward and typical, that is the way it normally is in this genre. So no reason to be critical of that, it is just the prevelant style for this genre.

I like the big bass hits at the transitions. But there is a problem. You obviously are using a limiter in this song, and it simply can not handle to hug bass hits. You need to tweak your limiter so everything else doesn't die out almost entirely when the bass hits pound out a new section.

The synths used are pretty appropriate. There really isn't anything out of place in this song, instrument-wise. And it all seems to mesh very well into one big cohesive unit.

As with 99% of trance, there really isn't a melody line. Nor are there any harmonies that I can distinguish in the least. Thus, once again proving, this is a programmer dominated genre. Hence, why I hate trance so much. :-P

So I can't give it a perfect score, because in my opinion composition is THE MOST IMPORTANT part of any song. And from a composer's angle, this song is pretty see-through. But that is the genre, so it is not meant as a slight towards you.

4/5 and 8/10 overall. Nice work here bud. I hope this review helped in some way.

-Gravey-

unrealdark responds:

First of all, I am glad you didn't hold back. ^^

I am as well really proud of the percussion, I worked reall hard on it, just by mixing and compressing it good.

As for the leads and melody I indeed could use some variation to make it not that typical, and straight forward. I am still working to acomplish that.

Hehe, yeah those BIG booms! xD Well you're right I use a limiter, and well... tried everything, but can't handle it. :P I'll try to compensate it though, thanks. ;)

With you saying there is no melody line, nor there are harmonies, I sadly agree.
I deffinately need to work onto that. Composing is really important. I see why you hate trance. ;)

I admire you critism, and wil deffinatly try to improve onto it.
HUGE thanks here, I am glad you reviewed! ;D

Coolness...

The beginning is pretty awesome! I love the synth/piano you used there. It sounds like it is a synth, but still has an edge that has a piano feel to it. Very cool sound indeed.

I like the fade out and crescendo into the main section at 0:55. That was a great touch, and really had a cool way of introducing the song.

The mix of synths is pretty decent, but it seems a little to stereotypical in it's sound for me. I'm not much for the dance/trance genres, unless there is something that sounds very different from the norm. This is pretty much more of the same to my ears. But that being said, this should be a hit with all the dance and trance kiddies. :-)

I think the rhythms in the percussion are perfectly appropriate. They really help to push the song along at a tremendous clip, which is important for this style. It helps to really create that dance atmosphere, and I can see people getting on their feet for a sound such as this.

I think my only beef, is that I'm not hearing a ton of bass. And I have a pair of professional audio headphones, and the top of the line Altec Lansing speaker system. I can hear EVERYTHING to say the least. So yea, the absence of a bass is pretty important to me, because if you listen to my songs, me loves the bass. ;-)

But overall, this is just about right for the type of sound you are going for.

5/5 and 9/10 overall. Nice work here bud.

-Gravey-

Dj-Brand0 responds:

Hey mate. Yeah the introduction is pretty nice! was interesting. Glad you liked it!

Yeah the fade out intro there was good, it was something I heard a while back and thought it would sound good here, and it looks like it worked out.

Heheh yep should hit all the dancey trancey kiddies :D

Maybe for the bass I should put another bass in the layer to crank it up a little bit, but any more I think it would sound bad on my speakers.

Nice system by the way XD

Thanks heaps mate,

-Cheers Brando

Wow Bud...

This is amazingly epic, and purely cinematic. It has the strength of a grown man, yet the innocence of a child. The wisdom of an elder, yet the tenderness of a young mother. The pure emotion in this piece is simply stunning on all level possible.

I sit back, and I listen for the third time. There are children playing in a field, while their grandfather watches on from the home. The landscape is green with life, and vibrant colors fill the eyes.

The scent of flowers and pollen fills my nose and I take in this beautiful spring afternoon. The children play, oblivious to the constant turning of the earth. Time stands still for them, but grandfather knows better.

His time on this earth is limited. So it is with a sad heart that he takes in this beautiful day with his family, possibly soon to be his last. Sadness fills his heart, along with many other emotions.

He feels pride for his son. Grandfather taught him well, and made a good man out of him. The family is in safe hands for the future, and nothing could make the old man prouder.

Love, for everyone he has known in his life. Family, friends, lovers, even mere acquaintances met in passing. There are so many faces, yet so few names. So many reasons to sit back and realize how truly wonderful and fulfilling this life has been.

And of course the sadness. The longing to fix so many missed opportunities. Although his life has been rich in countless way, he can not sit and think that there were not things he wishes he could go back and change.

But all of these emotions are pushed aside as he refocuses on his grandchildren. The family dog has joined them in a jubilant game of fetch. It is their favorite game to play with their canine pal, and it never ceases to amaze grandfather how much they truly enjoy the sport.

All of a sudden clouds arise, a storm is approaching. No bother, grandfather calls the children and family pet inside where they all have a warm cup of tea and watch the rain. It has turned into a lazy afternoon for the family, as outdoor activities have been suspended. All the better for grandfather.

He decides to take this time to really show the children one last time how much they mean to him. He gives the grandchildren a gift each. For the boy, a lovely watch. It is round and gold plated. The boy holds it up and swings it back and forth by it's chain. He could not be happier. Grandfather embraces the child for a long moment.

Then he gives the granddaughter her gift. It is a silver bracelet, with her name inscribed on the back of it. It shines metalic in the light coming from the fireplace. It is the exact bracelet she saw in the store a week before, and begged mother to get for her.

Sadly, they did not have the money to spend. But grandfather always pulls through for his special little Abigail. With eyes as round as apples she springs onto grandfather and wraps her arms around him. A tear comes to his eyes as he hold her tight to his chest.

As the children are mesmerized by their gifts, grandfather stands and moves into the kitchen. Mother and father get up and quietly follow. It is at this tme that grandfather bares his soul.

Tears flow freely from his face as he recalls the many shortcomings in his life. From his failed first marriage, to the loss of his first daughter in a car accident. Personal sacrifices he has made through the years nobody even knew of roll from the tip of his tongue. He can't even control it now, completely consumed by the swirl of emotions consuming him.

And as abruptly as he began, grandfather is finished. He looks up at his daughter-in-law with love in his eyes. Then turns to his son and beams with pride, tears welling up in his eyes yet again. Despite all of his shortcomings and mistakes, he did well for those he loved in his life. And it is with this resolve, that he gathers himself and moves towards his bedroom.

He tells everyone goodnight, and kisses the grandchildren on their foreheads. For he knows, this is his last night. Never, to wake again.

5/5 and 10/10

-Gravey-

Aeris responds:

wow....

i mean... jeez Gravey, wtf is wrong with you. i mean really? This is beautiful friggin' literature!

Makes me glad I'm young, but i have a feeling that when i grow old, i'm gonna remember this D:

This will be up on my page tomorrow.

Thanks

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