Gravey's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[In The End...]

Very Cool...

First off, I have to say this has an 8-bit feeling to it. It seems like it should be the background music for some epic 8-bit rpg. Especially for a dungeon level, or something dark like that.

As for the song itself, I like it a lot. There are a few things I think you could do to improve it though.

First, you need to vary the rhythm a bit. The drums you created really just do the same cadence over and over, which becomes a bit repetitive by the end of the song. You need to vary that a bit more, maybe add some snare or something somewhere. Or just change up what you are already using.

Second, I like the sounds and how they mesh together so well. And I really like the sound at about the 1:00 mark. Where everything but that one sound dies out. I think you could add a new melody there, or maybe expand on the idea you already have there.

Lastly, I personally think you could have more of a build up to the end. Maybe add a descant part above everything that is noticeable, but not overbearing. If you don't know what a descant is, (Cause not everybody took choir in school), it is a melody above the melody already in place. You most often hear it in choral arrangements near the end of epic songs.

But all in all, this is really good. Especially considering the fact you are using the demo and can't save anything. So I'ma give ya 5/5 and 9/10. Cause it can be improved, but I remember what it was like using that shitty demo version of FL Studio. And anyone using that deserves a break on their score! ;-)

Hope this helped, and gave you some ideas.

-Gravey-

jbarnett responds:

Ya I admit it is a little repetitive but it's meant to be like background music in a movie, so this wouldn't be the only thing you hear (therefore, less repetitive). also, I WAS going to add snare but none of them that i had went well with the rest if the percussion so thats whats up with that. I was actually experimenting with SAW and square synths with this one. And thanks for the amazing score ^o^

---jbarnett---

[Bitch Servent Draft]

Umm...

Wrong genre I do believe. Not sure how this is really metal. More of an electronica kinda thing. Overall the song is decent, but you should think about resubmitting it to a more fitting genre.

Now that I said that, let me critique the song itself. I like the string/pad as the accompaniment. It is really soft, and has a nice quality to it that fits this style well. What sound is that in Fruity Loops?

The lead, I guess "guitar," has some nifty melody lines going on. I like the overall tone you used in conjunction with the strings/pad in the background.

The song is a bit short to be a real song. What I suggest is not so much lengthening, but make it loop. Because this would be a kickass loop for an old school 8-bit side scroller rpg game. Just my opinion anyways.

Hope this helped in some way. Good song, but not really metal. So I can't give you a great score really. 2/5 and 4/10.

-Gravey-

Walnutasaurus responds:

This was more of an idea then a song. It eventually turned into Von Gina, which is a full metal song, with very poor sound quality unfortunately.

[Tea With A Plutonian]

First Off...

"Eggy" below me there scares me more than a little. I'm guessing he blew his "yolk" all over after hearing this. :-P

As for the song it is very nifty and cool sounding. Almost a funk vibe with the bass and drum beats. Not that this is a funk song, just has a slight funk influence.

Overall the sounds were very nice together. Very tasteful choices that is for sure.

It is hard for me to leave a very critical and extensive review for this because it is so different. It really has a trippy effect to it in places. I love the MS Sam at the end. Normally I HATE MS Sam in audio submissions. But it was perfect here.

So, 5/5 and 10/10 because this is so different than anything I have ever heard before. And I really like it.

-Gravey-

P.S. - If ya get bored, I have a song I posted in this same "genre" on newgrounds. It doesn't sound like this, but it is kinda random as well. "Acoustic Fun (Demo-Sexy)" Only reason I mention it is I wonder what someone like you, who comes up with such nifty stuff would think about the song.

P.P.S. - This has been "Favorited!" :-D

[Three Sixteen [Final?]]

Nice Bud...

I like it a lot actually. You made some very nice changes structurally for this song. I really like the break at 1:22. Fucking awesome moment right there for sure!

And you shortened the intro a bit, thanks you. Structurally I think it helped a lot. Oh and the break around the 2:05 mark is awesome as well. The ending simple, yet tasteful.

Overall really good. 5/5 and 10/10 I'ma give you, because I know you worked really hard on it. And it sounds really good.

-Gravey-

jbarnett responds:

Holy shit thank you!

[Brokensaint - Self-Loathing]

Never Post At 6:30 AM...

You posted this at 6:30 am. Not a good time to post. lol That would be why nobody listened to it, nobody was awake bud! But that is about to change. ;-)

As you know, my opinion is slightly biased, being family and all. But let me try to write an objective review.

As for the overall sound, I like it. Has a nice rock groove to it, not sure how really metal it is though. Definitely more rockish. The riffs are pretty simple and straightforward, which is alright for this style of song.

As for the drums, they change consistently with the song. And you added some nice fills here and there to keep the listener interested. I like the tom sound you got, I could never get any sound from your toms in the studio. So I'm a little jealous about that. :-P Not sure I like the kick. It doesn't sound like it was compressed at all, and is too low in the mix for my taste. But after the sessions we had in the studio when I EQ'd the kick for Motus and Soul Stealer, we all know how much I love massively compressed kick drums!

Vocals, eh, the only thing about the song I don't like. I don't want to hate on the vocalist, but I'm really not into that style of voice. I think the closest I get is with Chrome Division, but they are a biker rock band. Completely different sounding band to go with the style of vocals.

The song itself is very radio worthy. Catchy riffs, with a melody that can be followed by anyone listening. Not really anything happening harmonically other than the bass and electric guitars. Very straightforward.

So I'll give ya 5/5 and 10/10, cause I can! The only issues I have are with the kick and the vocalist. And I can't hate because I don't like the vocalists voice. That really isn't fair. And the kick, well I'm stuck in my ways so I know it wouldn't be fair to hold that against you guys either.

Nice job bud!

-Gravey-

Sicdrummer responds:

thanks bud hopefully people get to hear this song i love it no matter what you say cutie lol but i totally understand what your sayin with that your sayin HAHA

-Justin

[Await the Retribution (vox)]

Nice...

I like it a lot. A nice little metal song, that just punches you in the mouth.

I don't really like the distortion you chose for the guitar. I think you should have went with a fuller sound. But that is just my opinion of course. One thing I like about it is how clear the guitars are. You can hear everything really well.

As for the vocals, not really my style. I don't get into the hardcore metal very much. I'm more of a Dimmu Borgir, Scar Symmetry, Mnemic kinda guy vocally. The screaming doesn't bother me too much, its the singing. I'm not into singing vocals all that much really. I mean unless they are epic as fuck.

As for the drums, they aren't half bad. I think you should compress the kick a bit. It will give you more punch to the kick, and that is the most important aspect for a metal drum sound.

The bass is a little low for my taste, but once again that is just an opinion. I personally see the bass as a lost and dead art in metal. Always being mixed out of the song.

Overall though good solid song. I like it a lot. 4/5 and 8/10, because although I like it, I think it can be improved in ways.

Great job!

-Gravey-

P.S. - I posted a song titled Soul Stealer. You might like it. So if ya get bored go have a listen! :-D

TwilightNecrosis responds:

I appreciate the review, man.
Unfortunately, you didn't read the Author's Comments very well, where I specifically state that I had nothing to do with anything other than the vocals.
If you want to tell deathkllr84 about the guitars/bass/drums, go for it, please.
Regarding the vocals; my vocals are pretty death metal-influenced, which is what Dimmu is (apocalyptic death metal, but death metal all the same). Plus, I don't understand what you mean; screaming 'doesn't bother' you, but you 'aren't into' singing. So you're most fond of instrumentals? I don't understand; please, elaborate.
I am glad you liked the song, though; it was a lot of fun to do vocals for, and I think it's one of the best vocal works I've made in a while.
Thanks again for the review.
Metal! \m/

[Storm The Mind]

Neat...

This would be perfect for one of those horizontal scrolling space shooting games.

I think you could add a few more sounds to get a bit more dramatic effect. Maybe lengthen it another minute or two. Cause if you are playing for any length of time, the longer the song the less likely it will get boring after playing a while. Just a thought.

But overall nice job. 4/5 and 7/10, cause it could use a little something more done to it.

-Gravey-

jbarnett responds:

Ya. I was kinda going towards Command & Conquer/ Starcraft type games.

[Demon Vikings]

Vikings...

Not sure I would put this up there with the viking gods Amon Amarth and Turisas, but this is pretty good all on it's own.

Tasteful guitar distortions and riffs. Not overly complicated, but engaging all the same. I think there is a need to complicated the guitars somewhat. I don't want to say anything specifically, I'd rather see what your creative mind comes up with on it's own. ;-)

The drums are ok, but god you need to raise the kick. I could barely hear it, and my speakers are a $500 set of pc speakers. So compress and raise that kick for punch in the drums.

Overall though this is a nice little tune. Not exactly epic, but very solid. 4/5 and 8/10 overall. Nicely done here.

-Gravey-

P.S. - I hate zero bombers, so I shall come back and vote 4/5 a for a few days to help even it out. :-)

himenow responds:

Obviously I can't be compared to the Viking Gods, although I would very much one day want to be like them.. :)

About the drums, I got better drum software now, so hopefully it'll sound better in the future.
Also, getting a new guitar sometime in the near-future as well, so better sound as well.

Thanks for the helpful comment. :)

[Rausf-metal Drop C]

Intense...Well Kinda...

The intro was awesome. Then it got kinda soft and slow.

I really don't like the section starting around the 1:00 mark. But the riff that starts around the 1:15ish mark and goes for like 3-4 measures was cool.

I like the section starting around the 1:40ish mark a lot more. Has some nice harmonies in it. And when it expands around the 2:20ish mark, it has a nice feel to it.

I hate the straight strumming beginning around the 2:40ish mark. Really unoriginal there, cause straight strums are for rock, not metal so much. At least in this style. The ending was pretty cool though.

Now down to the nitty gritty and technicalities of the song. The distortion is cool sounding, but really weak on its own. You need a bass to fill in the lows, because the guitars are so high pitched gain wise that is.

Also, compress the kick a bit. It sounds rather puny in the mix. And a weak kick is about the worst thing you can have for metal.

When it comes to the riffs themselves, I think you could make them a lot more technical. Your intro was so promising, then you didn't do anything all that hard after you started the song itself. A real letdown. Do some of the sections in double time to get that thrashy sound you had in the intro.

Overall a nifty song. But it is transparent musically. No bass and a weak drum sound. Plus the guitars don't have much of a bottom end. So there really isn't any bottom end in this at all. So I'll give you a 3/5 and 5/10. Cause it is good, but not that good. A lot of work still to be done.

Good luck with this, and I am excited to hear the final product.

-Gravey-

[TechnoForce Break-Through]

Nice...

I like it a lot. I'm not gonna critique it until I hear the version with the bassline. :-) But I wanted to leave a comment here anyways!

5/5 and 9/10 cause I can!

-Gravey-

Badspreekill responds:

Hehe Hop on for the 2nd one!