Well then...
I will start off by saying I love the break at 1:30ish. Yea, yea, yea, I'll get to the intro in a second! :-P I really enjoy the filler in the background, that almost has a washboard effect. Not that it sounds like a washboard exactly, but it has the effect of being rubbed the wrong way to get sound out of it. Oh, and if that just didn't sound as perverted as it gets.
BUT ANYWAYS, the strings are wonderful. I love the style of strings you chose for this song. They are regal almost in texture, and have a very nice ring to them.
Now about the intro. I like it. The "washboard" creeps in on the listener, and I like that effect. The sudden presence of the strings and rhythm section is nice. And the bass has a very rich full sound, which is normally ruined by distortion in industrial music. Although it does have a hint of distortion, it isn't overdone. I Iike the soft touch of the bass, it has a very nice feel to it.
Your transitions are very nice. The fact that I don't even notice them really is paramount as to how well you have written them. I love the whole song really, I can't deny that. I like this song much more than "Dreamin' Clocks." You get a 10/10 from me here, which is rare for the audio portal. Great piece all over.
-Gravey